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Clearer headline
“Verify 98% of your risky emails others throw away”
- The term “others throw away” can be unclear to non-scrubby users.
- Consider something like this:
- Verify 98% of your emails marked “risky” or “invalid” by email verification tools
Repetitive headline
- The headline on the form appears right below the headline right?
- This: “Get 1,000 FREE Scrubby credits now. This offer won't last long.”
- Can appear repetitive and spammy
- Recommend to remove or replace.
Footer needs Facebook’s Disclaimer
Something along the lines of:
- This site is not a part of the Facebook website or Facebook Inc. Additionally, this site is NOT endorsed by Facebook in ANY WAY. FACEBOOK is a trademark of Facebook Inc.
Other recommendations
- Look into upsell sales page & copy. The PASTOR copywriting formula can help with sales pages.
- Look into email data to analyse effectiveness of the email copy and strategy.
- Here are some ideas to consider as you build your education series — now or later. Review this checklist as if you're the prospect:
✅ Despite my skepticism, I feel motivated to use my 1,000 credits to clean my list.
✅ Comparing results with my other tools shows impressive findings. Quick math proves I can save money with these recovered leads.
✅ The ROI is clear. Though it costs more than other tools, Scrubby delivers much more value.
✅ I know how Scrubby works.
✅ I see what makes Scrubby different from other email cleaners.
✅ I've learned useful ways to use Scrubby.
✅ I want to use Scrubby with my other email tools.
✅ Not using Scrubby feels like throwing money away.
✅ The Upsell looks good. I'll try it on my list and check the results.
Writing the perfect email series takes time. Keep these points in mind as you build your education series, whether now or later.
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